Feedback

Nathan, great job on the Presentation! Do you know how to publish and embed it? Let me know and I can give you some help with this. Nice job on the short story Dayten! Well written! ||
 * **Project Requirement** || **Comments** ||
 * **Phase 1 Requirements (e.g. title, arguments, etc).** ||  ||
 * **Phase 2 Requirements (editorials)** || Alec...please put your editorial text in the wiki, rather than a download of a file. Nathan and Bayley, were you planning on submitting an editorial? ||
 * **Phase 3 Requirements (projects)** || Nice Haiku Alec! Do you have any other poems that you would be willing to post?
 * **Phase 4 Revisions** ||  ||
 * * Proofread || Looks good! ||
 * * Published, professional appearance || Other ||
 * * All links, graphics, sounds, etc. are working

Link checker [|__http://validator.w3.org/checklink/checklink__] || Check your poll...let's see if there is another tool that will allow unlimited responses such as http://flisti.com/, http://vorbeo.com/, http://www.micropoll.com/

I have embedded your video for you on the home page. I hope it looks OK. Let me know if you would like to changed. ||
 * * Make sure only first names are present and no school district names used ||  ||
 * * Purpose of website is clear
 * The content is written clearly and concisely
 * Creativity is demonstrated
 * Content and language are appropriate for website topic and audience || Great job on the home page..short and sweet..gets to the point.

Nicely done! ||

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**PHASE 3 FEEDBACK FORM**
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Project Requirements** || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Completed/Comments** ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Project Information Page Complete and Updated for each team member ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">A new page has been created for each team member’s project ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Each team member’s project is beginning to take shape as evidenced by the action plan and completed student survey. ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that other team members have either provided feedback or contributed to the success of the project. ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Team Communication** ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that your team is using the discussion tab to communicate. ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that all team members are participating either via communication and/or changes to the pages. ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Phases 1 & 2 - Actions on Feedback** ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Phase 1 feedback has been addressed and changes are evident. ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Phase 2 Feedback has been addressed and changes are evident. ||  ||


 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Editorial Requirements** || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Completed/Comments** ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Each team member has posted their editorial on the wiki. || Ouch...only one member has posted their editorial. Let's get those up ASAP. ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Each team member submitted their editorial to a local newspaper || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Information will be gathered from the teacher** ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">If editorial was published in newspaper, evidence of that is included. ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Team Communication ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that your team is using the discussion tab to communicate || There's some conversation and discussions going on, but not much since December. ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that all team members are participating either via communication and/or changes to the page. || See above regarding the communication...more of you need to work on responding to each other and checking the discussion tab more often. ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Phase 1 - Actions on Feedback ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that the team as addressed the feedback from phase 1. || Good...I see that you have added a title. I would've liked to have seen more than the 10 arguments. Can you add a visual such as a graph to support the number of people killed due to cigarettes, or 2nd hand smoke...or number of children who have developed asthma? ||

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> Remember you will need at least 5 different types of sources || You have a some good sources such as the Department of Health and newspapers. Are there other academic sources that these newspaper/journal articles refer to? || I'm wondering if what has been in the news lately regarding the new advertising that the government is promoting should be somewhere on your page.
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Home Page Requirements || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Comments/Completed ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Title is present || Yup! ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Team member’s names (no last names please) || Yup! ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Position Statement is present || Yup! You are clear on this point. ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Catchy introductory paragraph complete || Good...simple and to the point. ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Supporting visual on home page is in place. || Yup! ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Arguments Page Requirements ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Title is present || Need a title for the page. ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Chart containing at least 10 statements based on research (remember you should have at least 15 when complete) || You have your 10 statements, make sure and include 5 more. ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Research coming from a variety of sources (journals, magazines, blogs, etc.)
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Works cited entries accurate and correct for each piece of research || #2 needs to be cited correctly ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Visual of some sort to support and enhance your message || Need a visual to support your arguments. E.g. A graph that supports the data ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Arguments present come from research--NOT student opinions! Just the facts please. || You did a good job of picking quotes that are facts not opinions of the author. ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; display: block; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Team Communication ||  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that your team is using the discussion tab to communicate || Yup...I see that you guys are using the discussion board. Try to keep the discussions on the home page. ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Evidence that all team members are participating either via communication and/or changes to the page. || I see that 3 out of the 4 of your have submitted something to the arguments page. Maybe you could ask one your teachers to contact the 4th member. ||